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animamods ([personal profile] animamods) wrote 2017-02-17 03:13 am (UTC)

Revisions Request

There are a few edits needed before this app can be accepted:

First, for consistent formatting across apps, the background should be listed in bullet points. This can be done the following way:


Second, looking into the series canon, it looks like the morphers for Mystic Force are items that cast spells, but aren’t necessarily bonded to the characters or summonable, if the wiki is being read correctly? The item would need to be left behind and as such would lock off the powers, but could be purchased as a regain with SP later down the line. (This said, it would be good if the transformation mode could be limited to about the same size as a large Anima, i.e. a small house)

Also there are a few typos and odd words in the backstory, if you have time to give it a quick proof read.

Thank you for looking through this!

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